This is one of the bestest of poems that you have written. It very beautifully expresses an unfulfilled 'desire'. Few words, and much thought. Keep it up!
[abhinav] The staring in the sky is quite pointless, though. I hope we stay in touch beyond the year as well, why do you think we might not?
[rohan] No windows, I can't make out night from day where I work, but I have a beautiful view of the sky and the sporadically-lit Bangalore from my tenth-floor apartment's window. It's quite a sight when it rains.
[vivek] You can't notice clouds in amateur photographs. This is the kind of thing that will not photograph well.
Whatever anybody may say, i find this FUNNYY!!!:D and the title ironic:P
just kiddin, but it's sooo innocent it makes me think Mr. Frust is 2 yrs old smwhere:D, though i'm nt sure u like hearin that, if u remember a certain conversation abt being kids from long ago?
[phoenix] Whatever pleases you. :) I am like a two-year old sometimes, and like any two-year old, I refuse to accept it! I remember a lot of conversations, but don't remember this particular one.
that conversation involved mr. conufsed too as a silent participant, and took place smwhere on the pavement of the road between pragati maidan and UPSC.
[aidoneus] ek to main depressed hoon, upar se you hurl invective at me? kaise dost hain mere? And they think they are sensitive, metrosexual types. Tch tch.
[phoenix] Sorry, Phoenix, I remember the incident and I also remember I got off two stops after you guys did and ran the way back, but don't remember talking about kids at all. :(
I'm yet another resource-consuming kid in an overpopulated planet, raised to an alarming extent by Hollywood and Bollywood, poised with my cynical and alienated peers to take over the world when I'm older and stronger.
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This is one of the bestest of poems that you have written. It very beautifully expresses an unfulfilled 'desire'. Few words, and much thought. Keep it up!
30/6/06 7:23 PM
well expressed in the least words..
but if there's someone near, u may not have the oppurtunity to look at them..give it a thought!
1/7/06 12:43 AM
[tapasya] Thanks.
[anonymous] How about leaving your name, anon?
1/7/06 10:29 AM
wud call it short n sweet:)
1/7/06 10:52 AM
u always seemed to me
- i dont know why
to be someone who wud look up
n wisely stare at the sky
n so i fear
that theres merely a year
to glean from u all i can
(im not an ingratiating parasite-man)
1/7/06 2:37 PM
B'lore seems to be giving you lots of time to "cloud gaze"....or is it just that you have a corner cubicle with a window?
1/7/06 3:08 PM
And thats why you should take a digicam, and show it later to everyone else!
1/7/06 3:23 PM
short and sweet.
2/7/06 12:52 AM
wohh..luvd it
2/7/06 9:10 AM
[debosree] Thanks, and thanks for visiting. :)
[abhinav] The staring in the sky is quite pointless, though. I hope we stay in touch beyond the year as well, why do you think we might not?
[rohan] No windows, I can't make out night from day where I work, but I have a beautiful view of the sky and the sporadically-lit Bangalore from my tenth-floor apartment's window. It's quite a sight when it rains.
[vivek] You can't notice clouds in amateur photographs. This is the kind of thing that will not photograph well.
[faith, anirudh] Thank you both! :)
2/7/06 1:24 PM
Whatever anybody may say, i find this FUNNYY!!!:D
and the title ironic:P
just kiddin, but it's sooo innocent it makes me think Mr. Frust is 2 yrs old smwhere:D, though i'm nt sure u like hearin that, if u remember a certain conversation abt being kids from long ago?
3/7/06 9:00 AM
profound
3/7/06 11:39 AM
[phoenix] Whatever pleases you. :) I am like a two-year old sometimes, and like any two-year old, I refuse to accept it!
I remember a lot of conversations, but don't remember this particular one.
[inhas] Economical encomium for sparse verse?
3/7/06 2:49 PM
Ch****a gaya hai kya?
3/7/06 3:04 PM
that conversation involved mr. conufsed too as a silent participant, and took place smwhere on the pavement of the road between pragati maidan and UPSC.
3/7/06 4:39 PM
[aidoneus] ek to main depressed hoon, upar se you hurl invective at me? kaise dost hain mere? And they think they are sensitive, metrosexual types. Tch tch.
[phoenix] Sorry, Phoenix, I remember the incident and I also remember I got off two stops after you guys did and ran the way back, but don't remember talking about kids at all. :(
3/7/06 6:17 PM
Hvnt been to ur blog much..bt i really liked this one.
7/7/06 4:58 AM
[harry] Thanks, and thanks for visiting. :)
7/7/06 10:12 AM
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